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Author: ap4y

_includes/download_details_pc.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 Installable live images support a local installation (with the included packages) or a network installation (packages are downloaded from official repository).
 
-Log in as `anon/voidlinux`, `root/voidlinux`.
+You can log into these images as `anon` or `root`, and the password is `voidlinux`.
 
-To start the installer just execute the `void-installer` utility with appropriate permissions (i.e., `sudo`).
+To start the installer, execute the `void-installer` utility with appropriate permissions (i.e., `sudo void-installer`).

_includes/download_pc.html

@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
     <h3 id="{{ page.name }}">{{ page.name }}</h3>
     {{ include.content | markdownify }}
     <div class="alert alert-warning" role="alert">
-      To install the desktop environment, DON'T choose "install from network"
-      choose the local install.
+      To install the packages for the desktop environment, DON'T choose "install
+      from network" choose the "local install" option.
     </div>
   </div>
   <div>

_platforms/arm.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ devices: [armv6l, armv7l, aarch64]
 ROOTFS tarballs can be extracted to a previously prepared partition scheme or
 used for chroot installation.
 
-General specific instructions are available [in the
+General and platform specific instructions are available [in the
 documentation](https://docs.voidlinux.org/installation/guides/arm-devices/index.html).
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_platforms/sbc.md

@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ devices:
 ---
 
 {% capture download_details %}
-Live images can be written onto an SD card (i.e. using `dd`) and they allow you to have a ready to boot system. These images are prepared for 2GB SD cards. Alternatively, use the rootfs tarballs if you want to customize the partitions and filesystems.
+Live images can be written onto an SD card (i.e. using `dd`) and they provide you with a ready to boot system. These images are prepared for 2GB SD cards. Alternatively, use the ROOTFS tarballs if you want to customize the partitions and filesystems.
 
-Connect to it using a virtual terminal or via ssh and log in as `root/voidlinux`.
+Connect to the system using a virtual terminal or SSH and log in as `root` with password `voidlinux`.
 
 Platform specific instructions for these images are available [in the documentation](https://docs.voidlinux.org/installation/guides/arm-devices/platforms.html).