fixup! Add newsletter #5 2018-07-24

Author: harding

_posts/en/newsletters/2018-07-24-newsletter.md

@@ -30,12 +30,6 @@ Bitcoin transactions, and news on several other notable Bitcoin Core merges.
   number of new native segwit outputs created per hour remains
   relatively constant, indicating no obvious decrease in adoption.
 
-  Remember that accepting payments to native segwit addresses provides
-  significant fee savings when spending those outputs.  Using P2SH-wrapped
-  segwit addresses [saves 26% or more][p2sh segwit save], and using native
-  segwit addresses [can save _an additional_  16%][native segwit save] over
-  P2SH-wrapped segwit.
-
 ## News
 
 - **Bitcoin Optech publicly announced:** we received great coverage in
@@ -47,11 +41,11 @@ Bitcoin transactions, and news on several other notable Bitcoin Core merges.
   [previously announced][workshop announce], we held our first workshop
   in San Francisco last week. There were 14 engineers from Bay Area companies and
   open source projects in attendence, and we had great discussions about
-  Replace-by-fee and Child-pays-for-parent, and Coin Selection. Thanks
+  coin selection, replace-by-fee, and child-pays-for-parent. Thanks
   to Square for hosting and Coinbase for helping with organization.
 
   If you work at a member company and have any requests or suggestions for
-  future Optech events (be that location, venue, dates, format, topics
+  future Optech events (be that location, venue, dates, format, topics,
   or anything else), please contact us. We're here to help our member
   companies!
 
@@ -62,7 +56,7 @@ Bitcoin transactions, and news on several other notable Bitcoin Core merges.
   inputs, and receive back a list of which inputs would be selected by
   the Bitcoin Core wallet's coin selection algorithm.
 
-    Meeting participants were mostly opposed to providing this feature as an RPC,
+    Meeting participants were mostly opposed to providing this feature,
     suggesting that it would be better if it was a library and that
     Bitcoin Core's recent and continuing work towards encapsulating its
     coin selection code would simplify development of a third-party
@@ -171,8 +165,6 @@ to share your experiences in implementing better Bitcoin technology, please cont
 
 [rand delay]: https://github.com/bitcoin/bitcoin/commit/22f721dbf23cf5ce9e3ded9bcfb65a3894cc0f8c#diff-118fcbaaba162ba17933c7893247df3aR718
 [p2shinfo bech32]: https://p2sh.info/dashboard/db/bech32-statistics?orgId=1
-[native segwit save]: https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Techniques_to_reduce_transaction_fees#Native_segwit
-[p2sh segwit save]: https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Techniques_to_reduce_transaction_fees#P2SH-wrapped_segwit
 [consolidate utxos]: https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/Techniques_to_reduce_transaction_fees#Consolidation
 [0.16.2rc2]: https://bitcoincore.org/bin/bitcoin-core-0.16.2/test.rc2/
 [announce bmag]: https://bitcoinmagazine.com/articles/chaincode-devs-google-alumni-create-industry-group-help-bitcoin-scale/